Like A Fish

The thirty minute writing assignment started "Like a fish" but I was prohibited from using the words swim, water, and wet. Here's what I came up with. Let me know what you think.

Like a fish, I spent my weekend squirming and flopping about from place to place. My parents died in a car accident on the same day I was born. I never knew them. I am, of sorts, different in the head. People have been handing me off to the home of some other person. I feel estranged and out of my environment, because nobody wants me. During the accident, my brain got damaged. Dr. Lawson says that I'll recover. I don't mind though. My brain doesn't work right. I tend to repeat myself due to short term memory loss.